Well I kind of like the bottom one? Not sure about the flourishes in the corners? Any opinions gratefully appreciated.
And this last one is a detail of the one on the main page. It's probably got better negative space and sort of concentrates on the important elements a bit more?
Hi, thanks for visiting this part of my blog. It contains variations of some of the illustrations I have been doing. Sometimes I can never decide what works better (or worse) so I've decided to post them here.
Thanks for any comments you make! If you'd like to see them bigger, just click on an image.